I want some feed back on a poem of mine, can you help?

I like it. It is very strong emotionally without being overly emotive. I also like that you do set a definite scene but with enough mystery to interest the reader into real thought on the poem. If "Candlelight Sorrow" is the title I do think I would like "Candlelit Sorrow" a little better. There's really nothing I can pick at. Your flow is good, your vocabulary is simple but not overly so, and your ability to create a scene is admirable. I think I went in an entirely different direction than most but I like that I am able to...